A fábula a seguir contêm quase todos os elementos possíveis, exceto a moral.(Que foi acrescida como complemento um tanto improvisado). E mais um aviso: toda ela está escrita em inglês por causa de certos efeitos sonoros que só se fazem ver no inglês.Em breve uma versão em português estará saindo, já que uma tradução não seria a melhor opção para recontar essa história. Gostaria de críticas e sugestões para alcançar os seguintes propósitos: crueldade, síntese, sonoridade, ritmo e uma história divertida.
Haven Hearted
Once upon a time in an little village existed a little girl with wavy black hair who suffered, suffered and suffered in her childhood. Her mother didn’t cared for her, his father was so drunk everyday he came with an new woman that he didn’t noticed he had a daughter. So one day the little girl tired of her life threatens prayed to the Heavens and an Raven came and ate her father heart until he was sleeping at the side of the woman. When she noticed her father’s death she blamed herself and got ashamed Her mother blamed her of her father’s death and the little girl got unhappier. To ease her pain she prayed one more time and a Raven came and ate her mother’s heart. The little girl was coming bewildered, disoriented , confused and ashamed with her mother’s death that she prayed a third time and an Raven came from the heaven’s heart and swallowed her heart. So she became Haven Hearted.
The moral of the Story is: Be certain of what you want is the best for you.